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Picture: In a car at night

annie
Sun, 16 Sep 2012 03:05:44 GMT

See picture: [In a car at night](http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn196/maotsujun_com/FiveSentenceFics/Night_zps05bfde57.jpg)

nitelotus
Sun, 16 Sep 2012 19:01:31 GMT

Life was hard. Life was a choice. Toma wanted a life with her. As he focused on the stop lights, it taunted him to go back to her or to continue on without her. Life made the choice for him as a truck suddenly crashed into his car just as the light turned green.

annie
Sun, 16 Sep 2012 20:01:31 GMT

OMG =O I didn't see it coming. I loved this omg. Good job, Nitelotus! <3

nitelotus
Sun, 16 Sep 2012 22:12:43 GMT

Thanks Annie. Gosh, 5 sentences is indeed a challenge! But loving the prompts!

christine
Mon, 17 Sep 2012 16:19:13 GMT

wow Jannie that was amazing!!! D: so freaking sad and I didn't expect that to happen either!!! <333

christine
Mon, 17 Sep 2012 16:55:16 GMT

His eyes were focused on the road ahead as he drove recklessly through the streets. "Slow down!" Ruby screamed, trying to hold onto the dashboard, afraid that they were going to crash. "I can't slow down...if I slow down they will catch us and I can't leave you again...I just can't." He said, pressing onto the gas pedal harder. Ruby turned to look at the man sitting beside her, his gaze never leaving the road ahead. The sounds of horns, tires screeching and guns shooting faded as she realized that there wasn't anywhere else in the world she would rather be in...

christine
Mon, 17 Sep 2012 17:31:29 GMT

good job lilly!! I loved it :) <3

nitelotus
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 00:38:37 GMT

Thanks Chri! Sure hard with this 5 sentence limit.

nitelotus
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 00:39:42 GMT

@Chri: Oohh....is this a shortie ftrom somewhere? Beautiful monster?

annie
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 01:10:24 GMT

That was awesome, Chri!

lillith
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 02:47:28 GMT

:O OMG. NOW I'M SAD JANNIE THANK YOU. T.T SAD BECAUSE A) It's beautiful and B) He died T.T C) It's beautiful and he died. My god. This may take some time. *starts doing breathing exercises to recover*

lillith
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 02:48:00 GMT

@Chri: ty :D <3 i'm glad

lillith
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 02:48:16 GMT

@Annie: :D thank you Annie <3 :D I'm glad you liked it :D

poptart
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 03:12:34 GMT

Nice, beautiful

binibningpunkista
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 04:57:35 GMT

@Jannie: I feel sad after reading this as well :( there's a lot of things he could have done, but fate took that all out of his hands. T_T

binibningpunkista
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 05:14:44 GMT

Chri... this was pretty much intense. I felt like holding my breath while reading through those words.

christine
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 13:23:10 GMT

wow thanks a lot Shan, I'm really happy it came off like that <333

christine
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 13:23:19 GMT

thank you annie!!! <333

christine
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 13:24:27 GMT

@Jannie: Yes it's BM <333 I remembered a scene in my head which I wanted to write from the pic hehehe

nitelotus
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 23:37:32 GMT

@Shan: Sometimes we try to make decisions the best we can and then sometimes, it is taken away from us.

nitelotus
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 23:38:03 GMT

@Lillith: Sorry Bb. I just thought of how sudden life is. And thank you and glad you liked it. Now, breathe...

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