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Quote: Silence makes the heart grow fonder.

annie
Sun, 16 Sep 2012 16:51:09 GMT

_Silence makes the heart grow fonder._

binibningpunkista
Mon, 17 Sep 2012 05:58:43 GMT

Rainie slapped her phone close and grumbled to herself, feeling all lost and beaten. She's been waiting for hours and she hasn't heard from him. No messages, no voice mails... nothing. Tears suddenly sprung at the corner of her eyes as frustration started to set in, until a knock at the door startled her out of her wits. She quickly opened the door and then there stood Mike holding a bouquet with a sheepish grin on his face, "Sorry, phone got hitched by a napper but I got to save your flowers."

christine
Mon, 17 Sep 2012 17:57:37 GMT

this is so cute!!! good job Shan! <333

annie
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 00:33:40 GMT

AWWWWW! ^_^ I love this! Thank you Shan! <3

binibningpunkista
Tue, 18 Sep 2012 05:06:13 GMT

thanks annie! i got inspired with this coz it usually happens to me in real life. except for the flowers. lolz. >_<

tasha
Thu, 20 Sep 2012 03:02:13 GMT

Yoon Eun Hye stared at the guy sitting next to her, he doesn't talk but continue to stare at the board ahead or his head is stuck in his work. Sometimes she wondered why he was so quiet, I mean he was a good looking guy you would of thought he was popular but he took no notice in anything or anyone apart from his work. She leans over curiously, earning a look from him but she just stared at him wondering if she should say something. "Silence makes the heart grow fonder" He replies before turning his head back to the board. Yoon Eun Hye never had a chance to ask him what he meant by that phrase but this made her more kean and curious to talk to him again. eurgh this kinda sucks XD

annie
Sun, 23 Sep 2012 07:52:40 GMT

This was very good, Tasha! ^_^ Yoon Eun Hye must have been quite intrigued! My advice is: Sometimes you use the present tense; sometimes you use the past tense. You should choose one or the other to make the story flow smoothly. =) For example: _he doesn't talk but_ continue should be _he didn't talk but continued._

tasha
Mon, 24 Sep 2012 05:12:13 GMT

haha yeah I know I suck at that, keep trying to keep in 1 but it doesnt work that way =)

binibningpunkista
Tue, 02 Oct 2012 07:24:13 GMT

@Tasha: that was cute! It was quite intriguing and made me want to know more as well >_<

tasha
Wed, 26 Jun 2013 06:00:13 GMT

@Shan: awww thank you! :3