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Mon, 11 Jun 2018 19:08:53 GMT

jaye50
Mon, 11 Jun 2018 19:08:53 GMT

I liked this, I liked that it was a military radio program, and I love that you don't hear the music that the ladies are dancing too. I can't think of anything to change.

Lynn
Wed, 13 Jun 2018 20:21:33 GMT

Yep, fantastic. This hits, for me, what the other version lacks - the contrast between the formality of the station with the wild dancing at the end. I vaguely remember the script was something like BBC World Service, but it could equally be any serious, worthy station - current affairs, classical music, or a military set up as here. The emotion of the actors was real, that core values shot at the beginning was a poignant bonus, and I really liked the visual choices. If you can get my fave line back in ("Hell of a punchline") I shall declare it perfect!

Enni Red
Mon, 25 Jun 2018 14:50:18 GMT

Watched it for the second time now. The first one was just emotions. This is a very good film with incredible very believable performances. I was surprised to find out that 3 of the films I really loved including this one were directed by the same director ) What I would add here if I need to find what can be considered for changing will be 2 moments: The opening shots were a bit too explanatory for me. Or maybe they are too long. And I thought that there is too much of laughter by the guys watching the girls dancing. Other than that it looks perfect to me.

ritaw
Fri, 29 Jun 2018 16:03:02 GMT

Really good little film. I liked the religious men holding hands as they watched the ladies dancing. Also that we could not hear their choice of music.

Michael van Koetsveld
Sat, 27 Apr 2019 00:14:48 GMT

Great film all, well done!

kareliasd
Sun, 02 Jun 2019 09:08:41 GMT

Wow great job! This is what we are all aiming for! x