Kazz
Listened to your verse again and honestly, you came hard... on the first half.
> Feelin' Frisky? I got this pussy changing shape like I was in bed with Mystique
> Now listen...Yeahz was rubbed the wrong way like a Pedo strapped scotch duct tape, there ain't no way to console you
> Yeahz posted around, explorin' some kid's "area" like he was pullin' patrol moves
> We ain't fibers from the same cloth, remove this bitch from the box just to iron em out n' fold you
> That's the secondary way Yeahz became heated n' pressed
It was after you played the audio that it went downhill. They rhymes was there but the cadence was full throttle which left no time to invest in your disses.
Notdead
Listened to your verse again and honestly, I feel people may slight the scheme and bars that could be recycled without realizing if they were hit by them, you still coming hard. With the inclusions of the direct personals (i.e. Burkhead) I felt this was direct and confrontat ional. The monotonous vocal tone is what's holding this back. It's obvious you got the bars and you can spit, but is this your style?
Also, wordplay is great to a certain point but can also disrupt the flow.