Sat, 16 May 2015 19:45:00 GMT
Flow actually alright but it could use improvement.
I like the double time flow you used at one point - it worked really well.
You could also work on your delivery - project your voice, be more confident. It's a rap about being a true emcee but your sound like you're really awkward/shy on the mic.
Enunciate your words - you slur at quite a few points, if I didn't have the lyrics I wouldn't have known what you said
This is the first rap i've heard from you and it was pretty good. I look forward to hearing more from you, man
Sat, 16 May 2015 19:48:49 GMT
Thank you very much for taking the time to listen!
I attempt to vary my flow and surprise the listener when I can, I'm glad you enjoyed the double flow section.
I'm working on my clarity, I acknowledge that sometimes my pronunciation isn't quite on spot. English is not my native language (I'm Brazilian), so that's a work in progress
And about projecting my voice, I recorded this quite late in the night and I couldn't beast all over the beat like I really wanted to! But I'll pay attention to this in future occasions
Thanks again man. Your feedback was precious