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Sun, 01 Nov 2015 23:25:20 GMT

The two things I would work on would be your delivery and staying on beat (which would really go back to delivery). Also, your lyrics were pretty basic and seemingly repetitive, especially the hook. Try expanding a bit more, especially since the hook appears in the song 3 times.

Sun, 08 Nov 2015 16:12:35 GMT

I'll look into that thanks :D