Fri, 06 Nov 2015 16:33:37 GMT
This started out awesome but went down hill. I loved the intro. It was dope. I really liked your first verse. I don't like your hook at all, the second verse lost it.
I'm fascinated by your delivery and sound in a way that I don't like it initially, but would probably become addicted to it if there was enough to listen to. I think it works really well with the song-songy musical stuff with complex and constant rhymes like you have in the intro. That was super dope.