Fri, 27 Nov 2015 21:02:54 GMT
I really like this, but I don't love it. It took me quite a while to figure out why it felt just a little off, because your flow is solid, rhyme scheme is dope, your voice is solid, the mixing is good, but I think I finally figured it out: it's not as sharp as it needs to be. Your delivery needs just a little bit more annunciation in some places. If I were you, I'd bump this for the next week or two, and then rerecord it. I bet it'll be sharper and crisper and better.
That's a really minor critique, though, everything is on point, and even your annunciation is good, just not quite as perfect as everything else. Keep it up man! This is beast.