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Thu, 25 Feb 2016 19:21:59 GMT

this is actually pretty good but i feel like your flow doesn't sound very natural. Need to work on delivery and i think this would be fire

Thu, 25 Feb 2016 19:24:41 GMT

Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it. Do you have some suggestions for my delivery? Because I've heard it before but I'm still trying to grasp what it means :S