Sat, 02 Jul 2016 21:13:01 GMT
It was a little short, I'd back it longer and add more rhymes. The "yo" part at the end of the lines didn't always work. The tone in your voice was really good. I loved the delivery just keep working on the lyrics and rhymes and stuff man. Keep practicing
Sat, 02 Jul 2016 21:14:40 GMT
Ik i was going keep going but This was really hard almost had tears coming from my eyes.