Thu, 30 Jun 2016 23:10:47 GMT
Lyrics: ★ ★ ★
Delivery: ★ ★ ★ ★
Production Value: ★ ★ ★
I think you need to work on your lyrics. You remind me a lot of my older stuff, where you know what you want to convey, but not how to say it well. Focus on making your lyrics as good as you can. A good process is to write your lyrics and then pick out lines that are weak or need reworking. Then leave it and come back and try to "fix" or improve those lines.
Keep it up though! I like your delivery and the production isn't bad!
Thu, 30 Jun 2016 23:18:51 GMT
Thanks for the feedback here Hyde, good points to take and that sound like a helpful way to write for future songs. Appreciate it.