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Thu, 07 Jul 2016 13:01:03 GMT

Great track man, really nice lyrics and good flow. Only advice would be that in some places it sounds like your slightly struggling for breath, which is fair enough cos you're packing in a lot of words there. I'd say either take a few words out to make room to breathe or just come in a little later. So if you end taking a breath on the first beat of the bar then start spitting on the offbeat or on the second bar beat. Then again the more your spit it, the better you'll get smashing out the words. Not being a picky fucker, think it sounds great, just it's something I struggle with myself and i've found those things help. Nice job, as always.