Tue, 05 Jul 2016 02:51:20 GMT
Shit homie, nice song! I was absolutely bangin' to this. Honestly I can't really think of anything major to improve, albeit for a minor point in delivery: at times I felt it was a but too choppy. I'll use this line as an example:
"Spray cologne up in the play pen to cover up the fragrance"
I also felt you rushed a line or two; take, for example this line:
"race of non conformists yet conforming to the masses"
Honestly, any changes you may implement are minor, and all I said is my personal preference and input. You do you fam; do whatever you think fits _your_ style.
Good luck in the cypher. I'll be entering, as well!
Tue, 05 Jul 2016 03:02:17 GMT
Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate you taking the time to listen. Send me a message when you post yours and I'll show you the same respect.
Tue, 05 Jul 2016 03:03:57 GMT
No problem, and will do!