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Dope, but some advice...

JayDi
Wed, 06 Jul 2016 17:56:12 GMT

My Rating Lyrics: ★ ★ ★ ★ Delivery: ★ ★ ★ ★ Production Value: ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ Work on your delivery and speaking clearer... because at times I was disappointed there weren't lyrics because I couldn't understand everything you said. Make sure your bars are original because I heard "hated, discriminated" and they come from Eminem's 'Cleaning Out My Closet' and in your chorus 'Scream and shout' is a well known Will.I.Am song. You sounded perhaps like you were trying to be Lil Wayne, 50 Cent or Childish Gambino, I felt like although your flow was good it wasn't quite your own if you get me. That's the critical side of it- However I liked the beat behind your voice, it made the flow dope! The tune is real catchy and (if lyrics were available) I could easily imagine people learning your lyrics and singing along to your songs. It isn't hard to tell you have some unique talent, but let the originality be expressed, don't be dependent on other artists lyrics. Keep writing, kee p recording and make something outta yourself because I know you have what it takes to make your rapping successful. Work on that delivery and originality man :)

KingDemise
Wed, 06 Jul 2016 20:29:43 GMT

ill get back to this in a hurry

KingDemise
Thu, 07 Jul 2016 14:44:51 GMT

yeah i used some lines from other rappers but not meaning to, i dont bite, check out my other stuff. im gonna put lyrics up theyre on my phone.