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Roane
Wed, 21 Dec 2016 07:37:14 GMT

This isn't half bad tbh. Imma go down the list for ya peeps. Chorus was ill, and TRE your flow was nice, but the synthetic sound in your vocals I don't really fw... I've heard it in all the tracks Ive heard from you, so I'm sure it's an artistic selection, but that's really the only thing I've got for you. Everything else is pretty clean and crisp. DC: Your lyrics are pretty dope tbh, but the enunciation on the words isn't quite there. Keep working on that aspect, and you'll be nice af after a while. BB: I love the creative attempt at the beginning of the verse with the dragged out syllables, but it was a smidge off flow wise. Nice job goin big though! I think your main thing is still flow and finding that rhythm of the beat that you can vibe to. props to y'all. nice track, and nice collab!

PsychoPumpkin
Wed, 21 Dec 2016 21:37:27 GMT

Now this is real, detailed feedback! Thanks man!