Tue, 20 Dec 2016 13:06:34 GMT
Nice little collab here... Enjoyed it. Here are some thoughts
So I found the hook to get a bit grating on the final held word.
V1 thought this had a nice autobiographical finish that came across simple and honest
V2 they way words form in your mouth. I can't fig it out.. It's your accent typical for your region? No shade just curious
Thought you had some good moments... Particularly
>How to get famous, man I have to find the answers
>Damn I have to practice hard to advance up the rap ladder
V3.. I get what you are trying gets but it didn't quite land for me.. But does show a good instinct.
Thought you had a nice run commencing with
>Don't see the world like I do they don't understand what I make
>But for pete's sake it depends on how you cut the cake
Thought this faded out a bit oddly
All that said props guys