Mon, 02 Jan 2017 21:07:01 GMT
This joint is longer than most, so if any more work can be put toward it, I would suggest slimming it down a bit, cutting out lines that aren't your absolute favorite. Also maybe adding some effects to your voice or adding in layers of your voice would increase production value exponentially and give the joint the spice that it would do well to have. The message and its delivery are actually quite good and I can relate to this. Good stuff.
Mon, 02 Jan 2017 23:54:15 GMT
Hmm...I personally wouldn't cut it cause as songform goes it would would throw the writing off but, maybe shorten the song in general is what you meant(though for 20 bucks I was riding the whole thing out LOL). I did layer my voice in there not highly noticeable but, it's there. I can definitely see effects working in this song so I may try that in another song. That's for that feedback it is pretty thoughtful. I appreciate you checking the song out.