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Tue, 03 Jan 2017 06:18:05 GMT

My Rating Lyrics: ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ Delivery: ★ ★ ★ Production Value: ★ ★ ★ ★ Loved your lyrics in this. you had some neat punches, and the space theme you did really meshed with the type of beat well, so props on that. I wasn't really feeling your flow on this tbh. it didn't sound all that smooth imo, like you were anticipating the beat when you were rapping instead of just vining with it. it sounded like you were a fraction ahead of the beat throughout the song imo. Delivery was alright, although I didn't really enjoy the singing too much. I don't think you were off key, but your voice didn't project the way I would expect from a song like this. I really wanted that POWERFUL FULL vocal when you sang. You can either get lessons to help fix that, or layer more harmonies and vocals on top of it(i do layers because I'm broke af and can't afford signing lessons, although YT is helpful for that). Production on this is alright, minus the vocal volume being way to low and getting drowned out by the beat. I would've liked the hook to have a unique sound to it to contrast with the vers es, but that's personal preference at that point. Not a bad track fam, keep up the good work, and good luck in the cypher!

Tue, 03 Jan 2017 14:52:50 GMT

Thanks especially for this feedback. I honestly knew that I had a some weak spots in the song. The weak singing voice came from me trying to finesse my way around but, I did layer it some as well. With my flow, I wasn't all the comfortable in my little makeshift studio so, I was hot and out of breathe. I did realize the flow was spotty at points though. I had to slightly rush the product but, I intend to keep getting better and more comfortable on the mic. I'll just have to get use to my "studio" when recording. I really appreciate this. You and few others have been real helpful to me.