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Demonio_Blanco
Sun, 14 Apr 2019 11:16:45 GMT

Pretty good still like the one with that dick stomach acid line more lol Obviously this ones more of a story which is cool but this one needed somethin either a hook a bridge are a few extra punches to spice it up also the flow is nearly the same throughout which is alright especially with a story piece but its always interesting to switch it up even if u need to pause or chop up words

ShapeShift
Sun, 14 Apr 2019 11:26:43 GMT

thanks bro this helps a bunch