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Plazebo
Tue, 26 May 2020 22:18:57 GMT

Your production is awesome. Your lyrics are SOLID. your flow is good but you slip up in crucial moments. Just listen to lyric heavy rappers, keep at it, itll come so soon, youre doing so well, love it

bken
Wed, 27 May 2020 06:47:19 GMT

thanks fam <3 this means a lot me considering my recording set up....can you pin point areas where I slip up though? It would really help me

Plazebo
Wed, 27 May 2020 07:42:15 GMT

Its kind of all the way through. I think its also influenced by your accent, not gonna lie. "I was not able to process it, i experienced a lag" for example. You speed up at random and then have a bunch of gaps in your rhymes. Try to keep a consistent syllable count that fits to the line. Im not sure really how to explain tbh

bken
Wed, 27 May 2020 07:55:44 GMT

ahh...I don't mean to be salty... > @Plazebo > You speed up at random and then have a bunch of gaps in your rhymes this is intentional tbh...to me that keeps the flow interesting > @Plazebo > “I was not able to process it, i experienced a lag” I don't see the error here too I'm completely aware of the fuck up in the first bar of the track ( I actually messed with the vocals while mixing) but the rest of it flowed pretty well.....I don't know if I'm lacking vision I don't mean to disrespect your feedback though...I really appreciate the time Much love <3

Plazebo
Wed, 27 May 2020 09:45:28 GMT

Ehhh bro i dont wanna be mean either but like this is the realest feedback I can give you... take it or leave it man but you seem more into not taking it. Its up to you. You got this wierd way of spitting where you put intonnation on every syllable. You need to flow more in and out of it a bit. You also have a lot of words that you could cut out, and the flow would be better without changing the actual meaning of the lyrics. If the random speeding up and slowing down is intentional i reccomend you drop that habit. Of course you can speed up and slow down mid-bar but not as much and definitley more on the half beats. It seems kinda hard to explain, I understand that, but im confident that im not wrong here.

bken
Wed, 27 May 2020 10:02:46 GMT

> @Plazebo > but you seem more into not taking it. man..I'm always open to feedback...I know I'm nowhere close to perfect I just don't get what you're saying

Plazebo
Wed, 27 May 2020 10:06:08 GMT

dont sweat it bro we can talk on discord about it when i got some time rn i got class so ill hit u up if i get a minute in the next couple days yea? also bro dont get me wrong im only being so critical because i think u got mad potential

bken
Wed, 27 May 2020 10:11:07 GMT

> @Plazebo > ill hit u up if i get a minute in the next couple days yea? please do! > @Plazebo > also bro dont get me wrong im only being so critical because i think u got mad potential you definitely know your shit fam...I get that you're trying to help <3