Sat, 16 May 2020 07:04:35 GMT
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yooo this was really dope I can tell that English isn't your native language (correct me if I'm wrong) but you did VERY well and the only real complaint I have is in the beginning of the verse is that you struggled w your flow and trying to get on beat, but you managed to figure it out and nailed it. wasn't a fan of the beat but each to his own, this was great and I liked the message and how everything was delivered
Sat, 16 May 2020 07:13:26 GMT
I slightly adjusted my vocals to fit that (clears throat) sound ...I guess I relied too much on the visuals....and yeah my native language isn't English ..thanks a lot for the feedback knb!
Sat, 16 May 2020 07:17:46 GMT
would you recommend me fixing the beginning part or leave it like that?
Sat, 16 May 2020 07:18:18 GMT
I didn't think, it would be obvious
Sat, 16 May 2020 08:13:59 GMT
Nah it's not that big of an issue or anything
Sat, 16 May 2020 08:22:08 GMT