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GoodWill's Feedback

Sat, 16 May 2020 07:03:55 GMT

My Rating Lyrics: ★ ★ ★ Delivery: ★ ★ ★ Production Value: ★ ★ ★ ★ Your voice is super unique, and there's definitely a space for people with dope voices like yours at the moment, like 88rising and other similar gangs. Your beat is pretty dank, could use some tightening up. As far as content goes, this feels like an early rap where you're figuring some shit out. There are some cool ass lines in there, but there are some that fall dead flat and felt like you wrote them and couldn't let go of them to try and find a better lyric/theme/rhyme. I hella appreciate the use of all the polysyllabic words! But as somebody else said below me, if you're gonna use all these hectic words the message needs to be clear and I feel like it's lost a bit with everything you're trying to do. Mad props for making this overall.