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Sun, 27 Sep 2020 02:06:25 GMT

I can tell you focused on rhyming specifically in rap you can count syllables or rap it in a way to fit the beat but basically a sentence is a bar but you should write at least 4 bars and see it as a quatrain right now you just did a couplet ehh anyways my advice is to decide on the next couplet and possibly rework your it all better after thinking about it a bit more like you wanted to whatever you were about to write about to be on the concept of WRITNG so now from that think, what comes to mind like inspiration wise ehhh nvm that i think your the type of writer that finds out what the song is about after so like i see you wanted to talk about your fans being higher. what i do is i quickly write a few songs then by my 3rd song it comes out better than the other two i did quickly.

Sun, 27 Sep 2020 02:09:23 GMT

oh an a full 16 bars is standard to do so aim for that but possibly getting skilled writing couplets could make you better in the long run so keep posting