Tue, 03 Nov 2020 16:42:03 GMT
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This is a fucking banger bro. I definitely see the doom influence in this, the lyrics are on point and your flow is great. You put good energy into it but I do think it was a little too robotic. you have the voice you just need to put more emotion into tracks like these. But I don't mean talk louder or put more energy in, I mean rap the way you feel. You have to make people feel how you feel through the cadence of what you're saying. for example if what you're writing is in a more violent or angry manner you could show it by actually rapping like you're pissed off, if you know what I'm saying. basically your delivery is a little too emotionless, so rap like you FEEL the shit you're rapping about if you feel me. Everything else is perfect though, I would love to see you morph this into your own unique style if you can pitch in your own little twists into your rapping.
besides that I love this, definitely an amazing show of lyricism and I'd definitely love to see more of this.