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Hey guys, short film, opinions?

Nick Hess
Thu, 26 Mar 2015 02:18:01 GMT

So this is a horror short I wrapped up about a week ago working with some friends of mine as we start our production house 'Key West 90' in Austin this summer. I'd love to hear any and all opinions, constructive criticism is always great. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UiJ1VBlSI6U&list=TLVM200tTg25A and a shameless plug for an instant if you don't mind, shorts and web-series are quickly becoming my main income and if you like what you see from our team then helping all of us out at Patreon.com/keywest90 would be heavily, heavily appreciated. Plug over.

Jeremy Ellis
Thu, 26 Mar 2015 04:42:17 GMT

Haha, well done mate! Really liked the ending effect with the lights flashing as the girl gets closer. While it looked really cool though, I think it could've been scarier. The ending I mean. I've seen a similar effect in a Horror short film on Youtube (don't remember the name) except that one freaked me the F out! So yea, overall it was really well made and kept my attention, but I feel the horror element could be improved. Right now it's only kinda scary. With some more experimenting I think you'll nail the right mood.